In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative situation?
In many nations around the world,
to own
a Change the verb form
owning
house
is most crucial for the people
instead
of living in a rented one
. This
essay will consider various factors behind this
, and the negative impacts this
situation bring
Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
in
Change preposition
to
people
's lives. The native people
of certain countries have Correct article usage
a tendancy
tendancy
to purchase their own houses. Correct your spelling
tendency
This
is because owning a house
is considered as
a prestigious thing and Change preposition
apply
also
people
do it from an investment point of view. On
contrast, Change preposition
In
people
in my country often think a person is poor if he does not own a house
. Another key reason, the population considers while
purchasing a house
is that - it will serve as an investment in the long run. For example
, one
of my friend
has purchased two flats in India, just for Change to a plural noun
friends
the
investment purposes. There are negative factors involved in owning a Correct article usage
apply
house
rather living
in a rented Correct word choice
than living
one
. To buy a house
, there is often heavy
Correct article usage
a heavy
home-loan
is involved. Because of Correct your spelling
home
this
, people
tend to pay large amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
hard earned
money to book a Add a hyphen
hard-earned
house
. This
makes people
to
lose huge Change the verb form
apply
sum
in Fix the agreement mistake
sums
one
go. This
amount can be easily invested in the
Mutual Funds or bank schemes to generate more money Correct article usage
apply
instead
of spending it on the house
. For instance
, one
of my friend
took a Change to a plural noun
friends
house
worth 50Lakhs and paid 30Lakh as a down payment to the Bank, which he could have kept as his retirement funds to earn high interest on that. In conclusion, though owning a house
is seen as reputable
thing, Add an article
a reputable
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
people
often get involved in
losing their Change preposition
apply
lifes'
savings just to own a Change noun form
lifes
house
and cost
of houses decreases Correct article usage
the cost
day-by-day
, which is definitely not an attractive thing to do.Correct your spelling
day by day
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite