Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the

museums

are the treasure banks of knowledge and showcases the evolution of the

the

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country. It is constantly argued topic whether the exhibition galleries should

display

only national collections and artworks or include the works of international artists as well. I assert

to

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the opinion that it should contain a mixture of all

world

art forms together with the local works. My viewpoint will be discussed in

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essay with the reasons

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. The

first

standpoint in the light of

this

is the fact that

museums

generate curiosity in the minds of the people. For igniting that, the museum should have different eye-catchy displays of different country's historic events.

This

will gauge the human minds to learn new things

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the

world

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Conversely

, our local

tradition

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and handmade treasures will be showcased in various parts of the

world

.

In addition

to the aforementioned standpoints, the reinforcing point is the displays that will keep ever-changing due to the

ever growing

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world

, and that will change the myth of considering the

museums

as monotonous houses of

display

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. Apart from that,

this

will help in relating the pupil's bookish knowledge with the actual

display

pieces. They will be more inclined towards knowing the local and international histories and cultures and will be able to fiercely discuss their opinions on the global level. It will dramatically boost the minds of the young generation. To cap it all, I strongly agree that the

Museums

and art galleries are the apt modes of

display

for

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world

histories,

alongwith

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along with

the traditional artisan's works and cultural stories. Both the forms of treasures are equally necessary for making

such

knowledge institutions lively and enjoyable for all age groups, and

thus

keeping the citizens updated.