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Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Travelling by means of cars is the comfortable and safest way to travel in the cities whereas some opponents believe that cycles are good than automobiles. I will discuss both my viewpoints on
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To begin
 with, going on personal convince makes roaming around easier and one can get shelter from all rustic weather conditions
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, during
rain y
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 days and unpredictable weather cars make
drive
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 much safer and convenient whereas
person
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a person
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 on
bicycle
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a bicycle
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 will find it difficult to complete the journey.
Moreover
 , cars are
super efficient
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 and speedy to reduce wastage of time.
On the other hand
, going by
bicycles
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 have its own benefits
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low maintenance costs, easily accessible to any crowded place due to compact size, reduced carbon print and super
efficient
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 for health.
For instance
 , going by cycle in any
jam packed
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 place will be easier for
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a bicyclist
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bicyclist
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 to go and do his or her work . In conclusion, I would say both
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 have their own merits and demerits
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