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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #age #groups #information #websites #risks
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These days, social
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 took control of
people
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's daily communication, and it has been used to
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 the private data.
This
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 pros and cons and their effect on our personal information. From my point of view, social
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 give us more pros than cons in order to develop the human contact way.
To begin
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 one of the best recent years
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 of communication and entertainment. It gives us the chance to communicate with others wherever they are.
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, it has been used to
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 our culture, ideas and our personal life.
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, someone in Asia can make a daily conversation easily with someone in South America using social media.
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, the information that we decide to
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,
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helps us to be understood and acceptable in many different ways.
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, there is always a risk of sharing our private data with strangers, because we don't know all the
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are behind the screen. To clarify, many young
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 use social media, and they may face a lot of harmful situations
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 hatred, bullying and discrimination.
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, several companies use our information for marketing purposes which may be annoying, and
this
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 issue will break our privacy. In conclusion, I do believe that social
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 have more pros compared to
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cons. But,
people
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 should not
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 very personal private data to keep their privacy. And it is very important to keep young
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 under control while using
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social media.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social media platforms
  • Connectivity
  • Self-expression
  • Creativity
  • Global communication
  • Instantaneous communication
  • Personal growth
  • Career advancement
  • Privacy concerns
  • Identity theft
  • Cyberbullying
  • Addiction
  • Productivity
  • Misinformation
  • Crisis
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