Some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Is this positive or negative development?
Recently many
institution
add online course offers to their portfolio Change to a plural noun
institutions
thus
individuals can continue to
their education Change preposition
apply
in
the Internet. In my Change the preposition
on
opinion
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,opinion
,
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apply
this
is an opportunity for adults who want to improve Correct your spelling
themselves
theirselves
while they are working and it provides Correct your spelling
themselves
people
to attend many lessons from well-known universities
without changing country. But in the meantime, there are some drawbacks such
as lack of face-to-face interaction and distance-learning may create sense
of isolation.
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a sense
First
and foremost, before the Internet individuals or professionals struggle to attend on-campus classes
due to their work or other responsibilities such
as family, kids and household. With the help of Correct article usage
the Internet
Internet
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,Internet
people
are able to manage their learning process on
their own time and pace. Change preposition
at
Secondly
, thanks to advancement
in online learning many prestigious institutions open their doors for online learners. Fix the agreement mistake
advancements
For example
, Harvard, MIT, Yale, and many other well-known universities
now offer online classes
on specific topics for 6 to 10 weeks. In this
way
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,way
people
don’t have to change the place or country that they live to take a course from these universities
.
However
, nobody contest that online learning has some drawbacks such
as lack of human interaction and sense
of community. It is really hard to feel like a part of the university culture while attending the Correct article usage
a sense
classes
miles away. It is known
fact that human beings are emotional creatures Correct article usage
a known
like
to bond with others. In my Correct pronoun usage
who like
opinion
the most significant disadvantage of online learning is lack of communication Add a comma
,opinion
thus
cause sense
of isolation in Add an article
a sense
learning
period. Add an article
the learning
However
online classes
could improve such
as the help of instructors and people
can come over this
feeling with video call meetings between students.
In conclusion
I believe that online learning brings many advantages in our lives Add a comma
,conclusion
however
there is still some room for progress. I personally pleased to know that I am able to attend classes
from the top universities
without change
my home or country even if it won't feel like studying Change the verb form
changing
in
on-campus.Change preposition
apply
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