In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, to some degree we should preserve our

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and

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we should look for opportunities whereas

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can evolve and have

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future. For the dream to reach Mars is already in progress , The collaboration of Nasa and Space-x is already doing so much research to gather data on mars and many scientists are investing their time to check the data and researching how we can make human life comfortable on a strange

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. The Space-x already announced that by 2024 they are planning to start sending

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to Mars. For saving the

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most important thing to do. After all mother

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is giving us the space to live and food and we should always be grateful to it and we should always invest our capabilities to tackle the issues that we face environmentally. Recent news has appeared that the USA and Canada observed the highest peak of heat nowadays which breaks the record of over 84 years, many scientists and environmental psychologists believed that

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is due to the human population and that the biggest factor which might have been causing

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is industrial waste and air pollution,

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is very high time now that we can think of our home and government should

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encourage or introduce laws which will be in favour of preserving the

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I think to some extent the work is already in progress for both of the topics. Almost all the governments are focusing on green energy and looking for techniques that will help to reduce pollution by spreading awareness to save our mother

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. On another ,side there are some great personalities who are doing the best work to evolve

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and researching for living on Mars. If we see most of our generation is cautious above preserving our environment by doing lots of social activities and

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doing the meetup via social media and volunteering in NGOs, while on another side the same generation is excited about the new

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especially Mars and always curious to know what are the possibilities to reach there. If we see the examples we see there are many

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that are going on for saving the

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. There are many activities like saving trees , reduce plastic bag usage , usage of environmentally friendly vehicles; we are on our way to having an electric vehicle that will reduce the air pollution caused by the current usage of motor vehicles. The governments are investing in green energy highly nowadays

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as solar energy and many more

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. If we think practically both the

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are utmost necessary in the current scenario,

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are the top most intelligent species on

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than any other species that have been discovered. We should use

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intelligence to evolve and continue evolving so that we can have always a solution for every universal challenge that might come on us; But if we observe from the past we can see that we are slightly slowed down our progress for evolving as species, we no longer know how pyramids of Egypt have been made and so many mysterious

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years ago and scientists are still scratching their heads to resolve how it was made. So

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should always use their brains to service humanity and fulfil the service of human life. So going to Mars is our future and we should always chase and saving the

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is our present we should always preserve is and we all know the present has the priority that the future in any case.

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In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companie. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

The percentage of overweight children in western countries has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lesson about work abs become more disciplined other argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion?