Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays the

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has been increasingly popular among students.

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it can be a practical site to make research

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educational purposes, it can provide not only advantages

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but

also

disadvantages possibly leading to some

restrictions

by parents and teachers.

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restrictions

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the

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of

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moderately justified. In today fast-paced world the

cyberspace

has been presented

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everywhere, which justified the wide access to information by many students.

This

is an extraordinary plus factor since pupils

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with moderation and responsibility, resulting in raising of creativity, knowing of other cultures and languages and

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least, improving in

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of knowledge in subjects at school.

For instance

, through online information students can make research about any topic in

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,

obtaing

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obtaining

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data from another country and international approach. The more people using

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cyberspace

with responsibility, the more appropriate information they will be, because of

this

its

use

should not completely restricted. But

on the other hand

, age-school

children

are increasingly reliant on the

Internet

, that order to resulting in both school issues and health problems. The overuse of

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cyberspace

can become the child addicted depend on online resources all the time, once he or she is constantly overlooking

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or her imagination.

For example

, age-developmental

children

that

use

screens for access Youtube or online television without

restrictions

become

children

with disorders in

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speech and in the capacity of creating thought with emotion and creativity.

Therefore

, I believe online platforms should be moderately restricted by parents and teachers, rather than prohibit

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completely

use

, promote a schedule with supervision. In conclusion, the online platform

use

is undoubted as for the variety of using which is able to promote not only amazing upsides but

also

appalling downsides. I strongly agree that the

use

of the

internet

by

children

should be moderately restricted.

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essay argued why the

restrictions

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of

cyberspace

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moderately justified in parts.