Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?

These days, both developed
countries
and developing
countries
are struggling with several economical problems and they try to adopt
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for their problems and increase their productivity.
Moreover
,
countries
set several appropriate goals for their society which will eventually lead to not only solving their economical problems but
also
improving their productivity. It is obvious that increasing production controversial issue because
this
strategy
has several advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, whenever the country
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to produce more
materials
and goods not only will people be able to use their own
materials
and commodities and they act independently without
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to import them from other
countries
with high prices but they
also
will be able to export their additional productions and make
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by
this
way.
Furthermore
, the government can create more jobs and positions at workplaces and support many factories to produce more
materials
and products which would never happen if these
countries
wanted to import their demands
instead
of producing them.
On the other hand
, increasing productions need several prerequisites and initial capital and infrastructures to create factories and support them as regards producing
materials
with decent quality. It is clear that all of
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that are mentioned force
countries
to spend a lot of money and even make irreversible damages if the government can not manage
this
strategy
well.
This
fact can not be overlooked that more production
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more human resources and human resources should be had
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expert in their fields while these factors definitely depend on country’s circumstances. Take an example,
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is one country
that is
successful by using
this
strategy
because has many
labors
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with low salaries and it would be able to produce more
materials
and goods and export them
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the world in different categories of quality for any kinds of cultures. In conclusion, I think that increasing
productions
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has several advantages and disadvantages that
countries
should be considered both of them that whether select
this
strategy
as an appropriate goal or not. It depends on
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circumstance since lead to making irreversible damages with mismanagement.
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