The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts illustrate the proportion of household equipment
ownerships
regarding three distinct devices and how many hours per week Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
dedicate
to domestic work on average in a particular nation over a decade period beginning from 1920 to 2019.
Looking from an Wrong verb form
are dedicated
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the figure for ownership of all electrical appliances experienced significant growth with refrigerators and Linking Words
vacuum
cleaners becoming the most ubiquitous. Use synonyms
However
, a reversed trend could be observed in the amount of time allocated for doing housework.
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According to
the first chart, by the time the refrigerator arrived in 1920, laundry machines and Linking Words
vacuum
cleaners must have already been owned by 40% and 30% of families, respectively. Over the next 4 decades, the popularity of the refrigerator witnessed a dramatic increase, surpassing two other mechanical consumer durables Use synonyms
due to
be accepted in 90% of homes. Linking Words
This
ratio was 20 per cent higher than that of washing machine and Linking Words
vacuum
cleaner ownership which rose at the same pace. From 1980 onwards, almost all families installed refrigerators and Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaners, Use synonyms
varied
from 90% to 100%. Meanwhile, in 1980, the percentage of Wrong verb form
varying
the
Correct article usage
apply
household
utilising laundry Fix the agreement mistake
households
machine
experienced a slight decline by 5%, but Fix the agreement mistake
machines
then
increased to approximately 75% Linking Words
at the end
of Linking Words
surveyed
phase
Regarding the second chart, in the starting year, each family spent 50 hours per week on household chores, which droppedCorrect article usage
the surveyed
a
low of 20 hours in 1960. Since Change preposition
to a
then
, Linking Words
this
figure underwent several highs and lows over the following Linking Words
40-years
stage and started to decrease to merely 10% in 2019.Fix the agreement mistake
40-year
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