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Now it is assume ,internet make people more sociable while other thinks it make people less sociable.Discuss both views?

#internet #people
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advent of
internet
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,
whole
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 world
become
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global
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a global
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 village.Most
of
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people
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the people
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 interact with their
loveones
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loved ones
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 via online sources.While some
people
 think that
internet
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 has made
people
 less sociable.I will discuss my opinion about both
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 of
views
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 in
this
 essay. On one side of view,the supporters who
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 that
,
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internet
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 brings a tremendous change in communication.
I nternet
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 makes
people
 life so easier and comfortable ,now they can talk
anyone
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 around the globe while sitting in one place .
For instance
 ,a survey revealed that most
of
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youngsters are likely to get interact with their peers on social media and having more virtual
friend
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 rather than real .
Therefore
,it would
makes
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 their friendship
long lasting
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 .
On the other hand
 ,
internet
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 makes
people
 introverts and they
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 like to meet their relatives face to face .Nowadays,most
of
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children
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the children
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 are likely to play video games on television or electronic gadgets rather than playing outdoors.
As a result
,they are less socialize and would
prefers
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 to live alone. To conclude,
people
 can spend quality
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time
in
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 social media and socialize with other
people
.But on
darker
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side
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 it makes
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number of millennials,socially isolated.
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