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Some people believe that those moving abroad should try to adapt themselves to the new cultures. While some think that there is no need to do so. Discuss both view and give ur opinion.

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With the advent of a brain drain movement , nowadays people migrating to international countries is on
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. Some masses believe that adjusting and adopting new culture should be inevitable whereas opponents think the other way.I think adapting to
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 place may take some time but it will be beneficial in long run.
To begin
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higher studies and better job opportunities which eventually lead them to settle down in that place .
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 place has its own culture, custom and rules which immigrants need to follow and adapt in long run to mix with them .
For example
 , many countries exhibit their own traditions and festivals and they live in
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 so people should try and adopt
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some customs in order to amalgamate with them
otherwise
 migrants will proceed towards social isolation.
On the other hand
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 culture and forgetting own roots is a major drawback among
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. Teenagers get influenced by new things and adopt bad things from their customs which can ultimately lead to loss of
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 ethnicity and traditions.
For example
 , many adolescents adopt bad habits
such
 as cigarette smoking ,
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gambling
 etc which are common in foreign places . In summary , it is mandatory to customize in a new country but forgetting one limits and religion is not advisable.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural integration
  • Sense of belonging
  • Local customs
  • Social etiquette
  • Cultural groups
  • Job opportunities
  • Cultural identity
  • Personal well-being
  • Heritage preservation
  • Cultural diversity
  • Globalization
  • Multicultural societies
  • Two-way street
  • Excessive adaptation
  • Psychological health
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