Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Daily
waste
we produce is an issue for debate.
This
also
has
detrimental
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a detrimental
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effect on our environment.
People
usually
donot
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do not
don't
have much knowledge about
waste
management
.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
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should initiate camps to provide information to
people
and launch new
policies
regarding
waste
management
. The main reason behind
that is
lack
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the lack
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of knowledge among
people
about
waste
management
. Due to increased consumerism's
people
always buy new stuff rather than reusing it and which accelerate
our
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rubbish we produce.
People
are not aware of
damage
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the damage
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done to
surrounding
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the surrounding
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by
this
waste
.
Therefore
, every individual should learn about
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R's
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Rs
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of recycling.
This
will help to reduce
garage
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we produce and every individual should take moral responsibility towards their society. They contribute
towards
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apply
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by reusing some
bottle
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bottles
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, phones and other stuff.
For instance
,In one many
people
bought
two three
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water bottles
instead
they should keep
resuable
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reusable
water bottle and reduce their
waste
.
However
, institutional bodies can play
crucial
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a crucial
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role to reduce rubbish through launching new
policies
and by
equip
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equipping
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people
with knowledge about
waste
management
through camps.
For instance
, in
the
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Germany
people
has to pay
how
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for how
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much
waste
they produce on daily basis.
Also
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government in Germany provide money in exchange of plastic bottle. These type of
policies
are beneficial for environment and government may implement fine to
individual
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an individual
the individual
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who does not follow rules.
Therefore
, they can use that money for launching
new
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a new
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project
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projects
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to
waste
in the cities. In the conclusion,
increased
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an increased
the increased
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daily rubbish important issue to tackle.
This
can be tackle
through
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apply
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by educating
people
and through implementing
policies
regarding
this
issue by individual bodies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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