Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

These days medical bills are increasing day by day that why so many families struggle with payments of bills. so some people opine that

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the

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should give free medical

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while

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others think that the

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can't provide us high technology

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so they should use those assets in education or culture. Perhaps

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is true but it cannot be denied that

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care is essential for society.

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society

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not everyone takes good care

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themselves because of their economical background. They can't afford that those medical bills.

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, they avoid

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proper

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and die.

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Millions of people live hang in the balance since they don't have enough money for their

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them free

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services everyone

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to the hospital and tackle

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their illness.

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Takes taxes from all of the

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and people deserve to get good facilities. It is their

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responsibility

to provide them free of cost

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facitility

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get billions of fund from taxes and every single person pay their taxes so the

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should not

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his role for the public and make policy for free

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services. In conclusion,

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Education and culture

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a vital role for the nation it is helpful for the country to grow

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care is more important than

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so that the

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should think about

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first

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