Some people believe that it would be better for large companies and factories to move to rural areas outside of large urban centres. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

In some places around the world, many individuals believe that large
companies
moving to rural
areas
will be more beneficial to society. In
this
essay,the pros and cons of
this
will be discussed as I believe it has its merits and demerits.
Firstly
, large
companies
moving to rural
areas
will have free land,
although
companies
in urban
areas
will be charged highly for the consumption of space which they take regardless of how little the land which they occupy is, in rural
areas
, there will be little to no free paid for space which is occupied.
Secondly
, noise can be a huge factor when building
companies
in developed
areas
, due to the busy schedules of the vast population.
This
plays a huge role when it comes to building confidential structures.
For example
, rural
areas
will have less noise population, because of the little number of individuals leaving in the area.
Also
,imagine building large
companies
which produce a lot of noise close to a learning institute,
this
will cause a lot of
this
distraction to the teachers and students of
this
institute.
However
,the cons of moving large
companies
to rural
areas
might be impossible,
this
is because of the little to no land space for building large associations. Rural spaces often
lacks
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professional/well-trained individuals that skilled in working in large associations.
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