Every Year several languages die out.Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewever languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this openion.

Many
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vanishing
every year.Numerous humans believe that their
life
will e straightforward if there will be
less
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number of
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languages
in the world.I believe
this
is important to save
languages
.In
this
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I will explain both
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with examples and give
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clarity
about my
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opinion
.
Firstly
,
people
think they have to learn more
languages
other than their mother
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tongue
and
this
is causing
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hurdle
hurdles
in their
life
.In real
life
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scenario
sanerio
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if someone is travelling to
foreign
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a foreign
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,he may face difficulty in communication if he
do
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not know the
language
.
Moreover
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people
in case
people
want to use products from
different
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region that speaks different lingo,make it problem as they cannot read about product details in that
language
.To avoid
such
issues public is not supporting multiple
languages
and
languages
die out.
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However
,
language
belongs to their own region and support
culture
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the culture
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of that country or area.Local
people
prefer to use their own
language
and way of communication.
For example
in
USA
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the USA
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and
canada
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Canada
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primary
language
is English,
Indian
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Indians
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use Hindi as primary.
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,they learn each other
language
and encourage others
also
.
Additionally
many countries teach another
language
in their school and many
people
benefit
with
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multiple
language
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languages
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.More
multilangual
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multilingual
humans can help to grow business in multiple countries. In conclusion,
People
may face problems if they are not known to other
language
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languages
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and they do not want to support other
languages
to keep
life
steady.But by learning other
language
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languages
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people
can benefit and make
life
more grateful.Government and everyone should help to save
language
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the language
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.I would
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suggest
children
to
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choose
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at least
one
scondary
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secondary
language
as part of their
carriculam
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curriculum
,
this
will go long way to save many
lingo
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