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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #parents #children #members #society #schools #place
While some people argue that parents should nurture their
children
 to be proper members of
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, others believe that
children
 should be educated at school by teachers to achieve
this
 specific purpose. Since
children
 are very affected by some special behaviours at
early
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 age,
therefore
, home is a suitable environment to shape their initial personality.
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, parents are the
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biggest
best
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 role models for their kids,
as a
result
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 they can influence them by their good
atittude
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attitude
 as much as possible,
for example
, they can try to respect
law
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 while they drive when
children
 are with them, as a consequence,
children
 can learn to be respectful to law. It
say
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 that at school
children
 can practice their social skills because school is a place that fairly simulates civilization,
for example
,
children
 can
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examine
 the way they interact with other individuals.
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 from that, since schools have known a
compittitive
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competitive
 environments which can educate
children
 to stay motivated at various situations,
for example
, they constantly try to get the highest score in order to grab
toturs
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tutors
 attention. In conclusion, parents can impact
children
's behaviours significantly,
therefore
, they can pass down useful personalities to their
children
,
nonetheless
, schools
provides
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 a productive place to
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examine
 various skills in
children
 and encourage them to gain practical abilities for
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the future
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. But that said, I agree with the
first
 statement and I reckon home can be the most effective place to teach
children
 good behaviours.
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  • Moral compass
  • Ethical paradigms
  • Cultural mores
  • Civic duties
  • Socialization
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Pedagogical approaches
  • Value systems
  • Cohesive society
  • Formative years
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