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Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 argued that individuals and groups will win in
sports
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 when they are the fittest and strongest, but some believe that mental attitude is much related to success. From my point of view,
physical
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 strength of
athletes
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 but not
mentality
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 is the key to success in
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 competitions. Admittedly,
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mentality
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 can help
athletes
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 play steadily in the
game
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. One chief reason is that
athletes
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 with good
mentality
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 will not panic when they fell back in the
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, they will calmly face
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mistakes and analyze the situation on the court to adjust their strategies, which makes them draw level or even win the
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, if an athlete is not physically strong enough, he cannot support a
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sports
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 competition even if he has a good
mentality
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. So, the champion in
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 belongs to the
athletes
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 who are fittest and strongest. For one thing,
athletes
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 can withstand the high intensity of training which is necessary for improving their skills before the
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 because their endurance and strong muscles allow them to finish a large number of
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 tasks. For another, good physical fitness ensures
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stable cooperation in a team. If a member is physically weak, he or she might be replaced by another player midway. In
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, other players would have to spend extra energy to readjust the team's tacit coordination,
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 decline, which inevitably affects the performance of the team. In summary, I believe that mental attitude is significant to participants, but having the best physical ability is related to the final success.
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