Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

Governments have spent a huge amount of money on enduring touristry since they believe it benefits
for
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the country. While others think that
tourism
has
serveral
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several
drawbacks, I would argue that its merits
outweight
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outweigh
the demerits. It is obvious that
tourism
brings few significant disadvantages to the nation's environment. Welcoming numerous tourists
also
means that a vast amount of trash is littered from entertaining activities
such
as eating or playing.
For instance
, in Vietnam, tourists tend to
interested
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in street food or cramped pavement restaurant where there is not enough space for bins to store the garbage and
as a result
, people end up dropping trash on the ground.
Moreover
, authorities haven't
sloved
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solved
this
problem thoroughly to ensure
about
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the
cleaness
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cleanness
of
surounding
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surrounding
residences.
On the contrary
,
tourism
has numerous tremendous advantages for the host country's economy as a whole and for each
individuals
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as well.
Firstly
, the growth of economic activities is boosted since it impacts several industries directly and indirectly through
tourism
spend.
For example
, it can be considered as a
mean
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of investment in
infastructure
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infrastructure
such
as roads, rail networks or medical health.
Secondly
, touristry increases the employment rate by providing opportunities for
tourism
-related jobs. In conclusion, despite some drawbacks of
tourism
, it seems to be
outweighted
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outweighed
by the advantages.
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Government
Goverment
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,
therefore
, should promote
tourism
more as well as introduce few policies to improve the
environment
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quality.
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