Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors in major sports competition such as Olympic Games and football World Cup etc. It is better to spend money encouraging children take up sports at a young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is a major problem for many countries for the argument whether the government should spend more money training particular professional athletes or creating better conditions for adolescents of the whole nation.

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I partly agree that encouraging the participation of

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in

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activity

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is quite important, I believe that investing in the professionals who have the chance to win glory for the country is equally significant. The positive impacts of motivating

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to be physically active can be seen from several aspects.

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, with the heavy load of classes, kids nowadays have less and less time to play outdoors or even get on their feet, which results in a rising trend of obesity rates and other illnesses.

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opportunities like holding

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events for youth can help them get some exercise.

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,

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offer numerous spirits that are good for life,

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as teaching kids the secret of teamwork and the life lesson of not being frightened by failure.

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, participating in

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activities gives

children

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more chances to interact and socialize with their peers in person

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of communicating through social media. The great outcomes of helping competitors prepare for major

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competitions are nonnegligible.

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with, getting prizes in

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competitions shows the world not only the excellent talents of these athletes but

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the comprehensive strength of the nation.

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, these events are often of huge popularity among the general public around the world, watching participants

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the game

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the interest of

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.

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, the two most famous football players, Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi

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have inspired thousands of kids to play football.

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but not

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least, the development of the

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business of the country summons up the patriotism of its citizens. In conclusion, encouraging the young to participate more in

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activities is as important as fostering professional athletes for major

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events and neither of these should compromise for the other.