The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
given circle graph
illustrate
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illustrates
about
nutritional information regarding three types of unhealthy ingredients for different meals .The ingredients consumed are Change preposition
apply
sodium
,saturated fats and added sugars on the key analysis of this
graph
it evident
that Add a missing verb
is evident
the
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apply
sodium
is used as the highest percentage for dinner
and lowest for breakfasts.
For the given graph
we observe that sugar content are
highly taken for the evening Change the verb form
is
snacks
and lowest
was recorded for Correct article usage
the lowest
breakfast
.on further
knew analysis of this
graph
it palpable
that after Add a missing verb
is palpable
sodium
,saturated fat has high
intake for Add an article
a high
dinner
and lowest for breakfast
. we also
observe the lowest consumed is sodium
for snacks
,saturated fat for breakfast
and sugar for breakfast
.Overall
,dinner
accounted for the highest levels of salt and saturated fat,whereas
snacks
recorded for
the highest levels of sugar.
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apply
To sum
up
it Add a comma
,up
viewed
that Add a missing verb
is viewed
sodium
and saturated fat is highly consumed for dinner
,sugars
are highly consumed for Correct word choice
and sugars
snacks
in the usa
.Correct your spelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, sodium, dinner, snacks, breakfast with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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