Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, ifso, how?

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is an interesting subject for many. One group of people prefer a
child
to be
home schooled
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to improve his own welfare; while others feel that it is essential for a
child
to be mixed with other
children
in a typical
school
. In my ,view I strongly agree that the benefits of normal
school
far outweigh the drawbacks On the one hand, a group of parents feel that a
child
quality of
life
is improved if he or she
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at
home
. For their defence,
this
way of teaching may protect the
child
from bad
kids
and negative
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influence
influences
at
school
. Some bad
kids
, might teach the
child
harmful habits or influence him or her to do
negitave
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negative
things.
Such
as, offering him or her weed or pushing him or her to drink beer.
In addition
, the typical
school
class room
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include
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10 to 30 student's in one room.
Therefore
, the teacher will not be able to control and teach all of them at once.
Hence
, reducing the quality of education each
child
is
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getting
.
On the other hand
, some adults
brefer
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prefer
if a
child
attended a typical
school
. As a start,
children
are learning more about
life
from each other.
Hence
, the
school
is a perfect place for
children
to meet and teach each other things that can not be
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taught
thought
in a
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text book
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.
Such
as; how a
child
should respond if they got attacked by their peers, how to defend themselves when a conflict
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, and how to make and keep friends.
Furthermore
, a
home schooled
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child
will miss many important events that
a
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typical
school
life
offers.
For instance
, going on
school
trips, and hanging out with
kids
in breaks and after
school
.
In addition
, since a
home schooled
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child
is not mixing with other
kids
,
this
might affect the way he or she
interact
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with the other gender later in
life
.
Lastly
, a
child
whom
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not mixing with others at a
school
might be attacked by other
kids
in out-of-
school
events.
As a result
,
this
might make his or her quality of
life
worse and forcing them to be isolated from the other
kids
. In conclusion, I fully agree that the merits outweigh the demerits of studying in
school
because it allows a more natural growth for the
child
, and to have a similar childhood as the other
kids
, even if that means being exposed to bad
children
, as
this
will teach the kid how to respond to similar events in the future. So, I recommend that
children
be taught in schools rather than being homeschooled.
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