Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, ifso, how?
Home schooling
is an interesting subject for many. One group of people prefer a Correct your spelling
Homeschooling
child
to be home schooled
to improve his own welfare; while others feel that it is essential for a Correct your spelling
homeschooled
child
to be mixed with other children
in a typical school
. In my ,view I strongly agree that the benefits of normal school
far outweigh the drawbacks
On the one hand, a group of parents feel that a child
quality of life
is improved if he or she schooled
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is schooled
home
. For their defence, this
way of teaching may protect the child
from bad kids
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influence
influences
school
. Some bad kids
, might teach the child
harmful habits or influence him or her to do negitave
things. Correct your spelling
negative
Such
as, offering him or her weed or pushing him or her to drink beer. In addition
, the typical school
class room
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classroom
include
10 to 30 student's in one room. Change the verb form
includes
Therefore
, the teacher will not be able to control and teach all of them at once. Hence
, reducing the quality of education each child
is geeting
.
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On the other hand
, some adults brefer
if a Correct your spelling
prefer
child
attended a typical school
. As a start, children
are learning more about life
from each other. Hence
, the school
is a perfect place for children
to meet and teach each other things that can not be tought
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taught
thought
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textbook
text book
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Such
as; how a child
should respond if they got attacked by their peers, how to defend themselves when a conflict arise
, and how to make and keep friends. Change the verb form
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Furthermore
, a home schooled
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homeschooled
child
will miss many important events that a
typical Remove the article
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school
life
offers. For instance
, going on school
trips, and hanging out with kids
in breaks and after school
. In addition
, since a home schooled
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homeschooled
child
is not mixing with other kids
, this
might affect the way he or she interact
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interacts
life
. Lastly
, a child
whom
not mixing with others at a Correct pronoun usage
who
school
might be attacked by other kids
in out-of-school
events. As a result
, this
might make his or her quality of life
worse and forcing them to be isolated from the other kids
.
In conclusion, I fully agree that the merits outweigh the demerits of studying in school
because it allows a more natural growth for the child
, and to have a similar childhood as the other kids
, even if that means being exposed to bad children
, as this
will teach the kid how to respond to similar events in the future. So, I recommend that children
be taught in schools rather than being homeschooled.Submitted by azmen2 on
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