In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The countryside of any country in the world is considered to be picturesque perfect. It not only adds scenic beauty but
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supports a variety of other factors. But with the constant increase in population, the need to construct homes on these sites have been on the rise and I am against
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idea.
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with, the beautiful landscapes attract tourists which help to boost the economy of the country. The influx of foreign currency attracts investors which in
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benefits the country
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.
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, Bangladesh is now heavily investing
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infrastructure to make rural areas
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tourists. Apart from
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, trees in these places help to absorb the carbon emissions from the cities which helps to maintain the air quality.
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but not the least, the variety of animals, birds and other living organisms who have a habitat in the countryside
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attract wildlife lovers and destroying their homes to
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humans would be absolutely unfair. Despite the above factors, many argue that construction on these lands will benefit the economy as well as
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in other ways.
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, people who commute from rural areas to the city face numerous difficulties due to lack of transportation services but with the development of residential communities,
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problem will be solved.
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, as the urban region is already crowded,
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of increased buildings will only lead to higher pollution and more congestion. To conclude, I am
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those who believe the countryside should be protected at all costs. Keeping that in mind, it is
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up to
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the government of the nation to plan how to fit in the growing number as well as not negatively impacting the environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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