University students often focus on one subject. However, some people think that universities should encourage students to learn a range of other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For many
students
,
university
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a university

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degree is the final step before facing
the
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apply

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work-life. Education in Universities
offer
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offers

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specialisation in specific career paths which the
students
want to pursue for their future. There is often a debate among people especially employers that the graduates with the required educational qualifications often lack other day-to-day
skills
. I completely agree with
this
debate and believe that
eduacational
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educational

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institutions should introduce additional
skills
required as per the current scenario in the
job
market apart from the core
subjects
.
To begin
with, Every year there is millions of fresh graduates searching for their desired
job
in the business world. Most of them find it extremely difficult to secure their desired jobs in their specific field.
This
is blamed on the
collegues
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colleagues

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Instutions
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Institutions

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who fail to implant other crucial
skills
in their
students
.
For example
, As per a survey conducted in India,
students
from accounting
background
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backgrounds

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lack knowledge about IT
skills
such
as excel and other accounting
softwares
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software
software's

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which are used by almost all businesses. Even if the candidates are well educated with solving problems on paper they may not be able to secure a
job
without training.
Futhermore
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Furthermore

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, Since there is
a
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apply

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great competition among applicants in a particular stream
students
are likely to switch to another career path.
For
example
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,example

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may
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many

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young professionals tend to switch from Engineering to business studies due to
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unavailability
availability

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unavailibility
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the unavailibility

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of
job
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jobs

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and
surplus
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the surplus

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of engineers in the market. Introducing some aspects of business studies in
engineering
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the engineering

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syllabus can benefit the freshers to switch without
much
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many

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difficulties
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difficulty

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. To conclude, adding
subjects
to
a
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an

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already hectic syllabus will have some difficulties for the tutees but overall will bring more benefits for the future.
Hence
,
i
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I

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strongly agree that
unviersities
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universities

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should include a range of other
subjects
along with the core
subjects
.
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