Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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are free,

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give money. My own view on

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matter is there are some both advantages and disadvantages

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do not interest so places. More of them believe that they can find out what they desire to see on google. As an

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if a person dream to watch out

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places, they start to enter various sites like google,Yandex and so on.

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go there. I believe that there are some

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got enough money or chance, a person works and the

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history. It seems to me that, if there will become free, they attract more

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. Personally,I think so places are indispensable and if it becomes free,

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can get a high rate data about the history of the country. On top of

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a high number of tourists will learn information. On the one hand, managers of some museums and art galleries think that fees are crucial

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from the budget of the country.They can realize different protective measures,developing programs and so on with their budget. As far as I understand there are some positive points for the country and

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be realized from becoming any categories

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