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Work in being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your council. In your letter 1. introduce yourself 2. Explain what the problem is 3. suggest solution to the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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work
 going on for repairing the road. My name is
shital
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Shital
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solanki
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Solanki
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 and I am one
the
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 resident in Kim Tian Green HDB. I am living on the ground floor block 310
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 2 years as
an
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 tenant. The problem is that
,
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 there has been an excessive noise of drilling and concrete grinding
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 1 month. I understand that the road
work
 takes time and are required with raw materials and solid machine
work
 .
Although
 the
work
 is going perfectly fine, the noise from drilling and grinding is
extremetly
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extremely
 loud and
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 not tolerable anymore. As I mentioned I live on the ground floor the drilling works makes it difficult to sit in my living room
form
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 9 AM to 2 PM as the entire house vibrates due to the rotation and have
additional
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 noise effect. I am unable to attend any meetings or concentrate on my
work
 which is bothering me. There are 4 houses near the road who are facing
the
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 similar problem. I was on the assumption that the
work
 will be finished in
few
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a few
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of
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weeks, but I don't see any sign for
atleast
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at least
 two more additional weeks. One of the
solution
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 I can offer is that please start the heavy machine
work
 after 4 PM
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 so that we can
atleast
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at least
 try to finish the
work
 before that.
Moreover
, you can
also
 try to grind the concrete near the garden, it has a vast open area which will make your
work
 easy as there will be
lot
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 of open space for use. I Look forward to hearing back from you positively. Yours Faithfully Shital
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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