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The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause? How can these problems be solved?

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In recent days , we can see the trend
people
 from various small-town migrate to main the metropolitan
cities
 to seek for jobs and higher
education
. many belives the lifestyle in
cities
 are better. these action leads to scarcity of water and increases the living cost in.
this
 can be solved by with help government programs.
To begin
 ,with if we see many popular
cities
 in worlds are overly polluted with humans the reason being the major tech giant office and shopping centre are all located in
cities
. these attracted them from small towns to migrate to
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better lifestyle by doing
this
 the
cities
 face the scarcity of supply. recent a city in India has faced a zero level of groundwater. The experts feel the cause for ir the increase of population of
cities
. addinationly the living cost has grown up more than 30% because of demand from small-town
people
 to find a job and high
education
. the government needs to bring the programs which bring migrate to the other part of countries. which will create a balanced life for all. for , the example creates more job opportunities in other districts encourage the corporates to develop the factors and office in different locations rather than forcing one place. so
people
 will move various parts. ,
also
 the quality of
education
 should be the same across the countries since the young crowd travel to metro
cities
 because of higher
education
 which can be availed by the near neighbour for
people
. In conclusion, overpopulation in
cities
 can bring more devastate effects to the
people
 and create various problems. these can be solved by the government taking indicate by creating job opportunities and providing them with a better
education
 where they live.
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