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the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

#phones #landlines #people #countries
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 of mobile
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landline lines
 in more countries. Units are measured with the percentage Overall, the number of mobile
phones
 in Italy outnumbered those
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others
' index by a significant margin.
In contrast
, the least of the statistic belonged to Canada in mobile
phones
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 of
the
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mobile
phones
 rises gradually while the
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landline lines
 fluctuated.
Firstly
, with regards to mobile
phones
, the show is higher almost doubled in Italy than in Canada.
In addition
, the
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landline lines
 index of Denmark levels off with the mobile pointer of Sweden. Both are almost just above four-fifths. In terms of the
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landline lines
, the high rate belonged to Denmark than
others
.
In addition
, the least pointed out in Italy almost just under
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 in every one hundred. Unlike
others
, the show is near to each other in Denmark,
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meanwhile
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 the
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 are different sharply
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