the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

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and
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in more countries. Units are measured with the percentage Overall, the number of mobile
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in Italy outnumbered those
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' index by a significant margin.
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rises gradually while
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, the show is higher almost doubled in Italy than in Canada.
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index of Denmark levels off with the mobile pointer of Sweden. Both are almost just above four-fifths. In terms of the
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, the high rate belonged to Denmark than
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