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Given high unemployment rate, it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no secondary education. What do you think?

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It is believed that countries
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 have high
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 rates should only offer primary
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 extending secondary
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 to
students
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 who are not likely to find work in the future is a hopeless attempt. I personally consider
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 to be a flawed argument, and I will explain my reasoning in the essay below. Important as it is to a child’s overall development, primary
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 does not provide any necessary work skills. The fundamental aim of
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 early stage of
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 is simply to lay a basis for a student’s cognitive development through the learning of language, art and basic science. People who complete
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 level of
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 are not equipped with the necessary skills and knowledge to enter the workforce. While those people may find blue-collar employment, it is unlikely that they can get a decent job.
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, if a country with a high
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 level only offers primary
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 to the majority of
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, the outcome will not be worthwhile.
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, I would argue that investing in secondary schooling systems and delivering secondary
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 to young
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 are of greater importance when it comes to improving the overall employment rate of a country. In fact, nowadays, many middle and high schools hire a large number of secondary
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 degree holders who work better with younger age groups and are more familiar with the subjects taught at
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 level of
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. There are
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 many other types of non-academic careers,
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 as in the beauty and entertainment industries, that only require a secondary
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 degree.
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 but not least, I believe that we should not restrict secondary
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 to a certain group of
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 who are deemed eligible because everyone deserves an equal opportunity to access
education
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. In conclusion, I disagree that providing only primary
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 is the best course of action to be adopted in the context of a nation with a high rate of
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. Secondary
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,
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, is a major contributor to combating
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. I
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 believe that we should not dispense secondary
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 to only a select number of
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 as everyone has the right to be educated.
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