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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is a quote that says: “Your
diet
 is a bank account. Good
food
 choices are good investments.” Nowadays, scientists believe that
junk
food
 damage
of
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our health.
Junk
food
 is unhealthy
food
 full of sugar, and fat. It is the worst choice of
diet
 one can have. It can
also
 help the appearance of new illnesses
such
 as diabetes, cholesterol and obesity, and so on. It is said that educating people is the best solution for
this
 issue.
However
, some people think that education is not enough to avoid
this
 problem. Education is a theory in itself, you can teach a person what is
junk
food
, and that it is a weak
diet
 which can lead to severe sicknesses in the long term. They can learn the lesson very well and choose another healthy
diet
 and be disciplined until the end of their lives.
However
, not everyone on the earth can avoid it just hearing others, experts, doctors or scientists speaking about its cons. Some people are attracted to
junk
food
, and try new types every now and
then
, so even though they choose not to eat it, they end to go back to their habits again and again. It is certain that
this
 kind of
food
 has good marketing, snacks are really well decorated, and
food
 is full of delicious sauces. As far as I am concerned,
junk
food
 is a delicious one, but because it is unhealthy, we have to eat just once or twice a month. Forbidding ourselves from eating it at all can lead to overeating it whenever you are given the opportunity.
Therefore
, we have to have a sort of balance in our
diet
 accompanied by
exercises
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