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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

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It is widely believed that most
people
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 prefer to do their own
business
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instead
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 of working in an organisation or a company. It is probably because
people
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 can do their work as per their interest. In
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 essay, we will discuss the pros and cons before a conclusion is reached.
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, self-employed has numerous advantages
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 as they can do
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 in a certain area in which they are interested.
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, many businessmen in the computer industry have a profitable
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 as they love their work.
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 to
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, own
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 has a respectable position and overall control in it,
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 as how should be the work environment, dress code, exact investment, marketing, and much more.
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, there are chances of risk in own-
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 as the huge amount of investment without knowing the outcome of that.
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, many
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 hire some employees and take loans from banks to start startups. But they cannot get enough profit to give salaries to their co-workers.
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, many
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 owners cannot take leaves on weekends to make more profits, which may impact their health. In conclusion, it is apparent that businessmen can have more profit rather than doing jobs in different companies. In my opinion, if
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 have proper talent and knowledge about the
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 they can make profit out of it,
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 there is a risk of money as well as health.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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