: You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

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letter to express my interest in working

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at the head office in Canada for the

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two quarters. I would like to

work

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there to improve my skills and knowledge. The head office has some unique training sessions in

work

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management. I am sure that by joining these, I will improve my performance, and it will

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enable me able to train my colleagues when I come back. I will have my assistant cover my

work

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when I’m away.

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will hopefully not delay any departmental process during my absence.

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, I will

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be available online for some meetings and video conferences if there are any unexpected issues. To leave my current post and move to

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at the

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for the upcoming time, I am requested to get a recommendation letter from my manager, so I am grateful if you would issue me

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letter. I am looking forward to your kind response. Best regards,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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