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average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

#temperatures #rainfall #city #kolkata
The chart illustrates middle
temperature
 and rainfall in the urban of Kolkata. The statistic was compared about
temperature
 and precipitation. Overall, units are measured in
mm
 and celsius. The index of the rainfall was relatively similar in
January
 and November. What is more, the same situation occurred in April and June in the
temperature
. With regards to
temperature
, the least show happened in
January
 with 20 Celsius. The number creased gradually from
January
 to May and the top amount
equaled
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 just more than 30. The least amount equalled just above 20 Celcius in
December
. In terms of rainfall, the pointer of
January
 and
December
 was closely,
nevertheless
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 the least was appreciated in
December
. The development was illustrated from
January
 to July.
In addition
, the
top level
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 reached in July with just over 300
mm
 than 300
mm
. The
decreasing
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 happened dramatically from September to
December
 and the minimum number of
preciptitation
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precipitation
 was introduced in
December
 with approximately just above 10
mm
.
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