In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach ?

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, depends on the cultural value of the society. Is it true that more people consider

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a medical action for their physical transformation? Some opine that by conducting a surgery, individuals can optimize their

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physically for the

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and foremost, nutrition specialists are concerned about the healthy diet program for those who want to have an ideal body scale.

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, by maintaining the calorie and the

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of vitamins which are consumed from daily food and beverages, a man and

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will no longer

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of their look as it is more controllable.

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Indonesian artist, named Tya Ariestya, has shared her diet experience for more than three months.

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she has been feeling uncomfortable with her previous shape, she never

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tired to educate her followers to always manage the type of meals she

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.

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, after she has a consultation with her personal nutritionist, she just

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that the more a human understand their needs, the greater possibility they get to be

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in shaping their eating behaviour.

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, Tya has been showing to

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that the goddess look dream can attain only by organize the cuisine.

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, a number of communities in other countries may

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that they prefer to do a shortcut in getting

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appearance. One of the most popular

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is in Seoul, South Korea, as

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city is well-known

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high technology medical equipment for plastic operation.

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is because the level of beauty implemented in

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state is quite higher than

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nations.

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, when young age groups celebrate their birthday, it is normal for them to ask their parents about numerous alterations,

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as for their hair, nose, or maybe change their eyelid looks.

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, a myriad of beauty clinics

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spread widely in the town.

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has been assisted the juvenile in accessing the service they need. To conclude

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, whilst there existed supporting stances on the matter. It is interesting to examine and decide which argument is the most appropriate for the global population. I personally believe, conventional strategy in improving face and body

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which are imagined by many

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is better for personal health and well-being.