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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 you face an obstacle, is because you can go through it and become even
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stronger". Having that in mind is clear that I am
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 the side where at bad situations the best option is to try and improve. But it is so difficult, well it depends
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 the person, but we are all humans, we are weak when is about our mental state. Is understandable to have the feeling to give up, and talking from experience, is necessary to bottom out to take impulse and can get through. But
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 in situations as economic bad
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 it is necessary to affront it, in these cases I consider as the best option to not lose time crying about it
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, money have not to be a reason to fall; of course the money and the things related with fiscal needs are important, brutal
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, can be bought, even we can live without them, seeing it from a point of view so free, naturalistic.
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 the problems as an economical human, we have the rational human, the one that can be affected by a simple word as “ugly",
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 it depends. These problems are the more difficult to confront, these are when we have to put aside our appreciated pride and ask for help, here is where anyone can make fun of you where anyone can judge you
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 sum up, there can be times when our pride have to be strong, and we can't let
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 get down for things we can live without. But there are some other times when our pride becomes weak,and we have to leave it to go through. We are humans, we can be the most intelligent living thing and all you want, but as we think, we feel,
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 of diamond, we
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 up, but the important is to
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