Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, increased sales of common commodities show the capabilities of marketing;It does not show the

demands

of the community.I incline to the idea that marketing has an influence

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entire population and

also

has contributed to

failure

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the failure

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in meeting

demands

owing to misplaced priorities.

To begin

with, promotional

informations

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have led to the peer influence of impulse buying of commodities.

Moreover

, appealing images placed on different commodities attract the consumers which paint a different picture from the real product being advertised;

furthermore

, insufficient knowledge about the products by consumers have

also

contributed to them being misled by the marketing information that not only

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the positive

imagine

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but

also

convince an individual to buy the given product.

For instance

, buying soap because it has an appealing package to eyes and not necessarily the contents of the soap itself.

Therefore

, impulse buying is due to the influence of promotional

messages

.

Secondly

,the daily requirements of the community are not met, because those who are concerned with the promotional

messages

focus on making

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profit from the population rather than fulfilling the

demands

of the target group

further

watering down the daily requirements.

For example

, promotional

messages

which

has

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insensitive accompanying a given product

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promotes unnecessary buying as a fool and his money are easily parted.

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society will not be able to stand against

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daily needs. In conclusion, promotional

messages

have a greater impact on

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decision to buy products and

also

have a significant in not meeting the daily

demands

of a given community.