Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, increased sales of common commodities show the capabilities of marketing;It does not show the
demands
of the community.I incline to the idea that marketing has an influence to
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it's
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has contributed to failure
in meeting Add an article
the failure
demands
owing to misplaced priorities.
To begin
with, promotional informations
have led to the peer influence of impulse buying of commodities.Change the wording
information
pieces of information
Moreover
, appealing images placed on different commodities attract the consumers which paint a different picture from the real product being advertised; furthermore
, insufficient knowledge about the products by consumers have also
contributed to them being misled by the marketing information that not only portray
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but Replace the word
image
also
convince an individual to buy the given product.For instance
, buying soap because it has an appealing package to eyes and not necessarily the contents of the soap itself.Therefore
, impulse buying is due to the influence of promotional messages
.
Secondly
,the daily requirements of the community are not met, because those who are concerned with the promotional messages
focus on making the
profit from the population rather than fulfilling the Correct article usage
a
demands
of the target group further
watering down the daily requirements.For example
, promotional messages
which has
insensitive accompanying a given product Change the verb form
have
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promotes unnecessary buying as a fool and his money are easily parted.Correct determiner usage
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Furthermore
, the
society will not be able to stand against Correct article usage
apply
it's
daily needs.
In conclusion, promotional Replace the word
its
messages
have a greater impact on individual's
decision to buy products and Correct article usage
an individual's
also
have a significant in not meeting the daily demands
of a given community.Submitted by Sabina Hamisi on
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