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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basic. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time.

#people #time
Walking is one of most health beneficial
excercise
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exercise
 ,which not makes
people
 fit and fine , it
also
 improves the circulation of
heart
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.But due to
technoligical
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technological
 advancement in each and every sector , makes
people
 lethargic and long working hours force
to
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them to
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 individual lives
sedentary
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a sedentary
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 lifestyle. There are some effective
measure
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,which they can
implements
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 in their life and lives
healthy
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a healthy
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 lifestyle. There are many plausible reasons ,which discouraged the
people
 from walking.
Firstly
 ,due to abundance of electronic gadgets
in
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everywhere ,especially in kitchens,makes
people
's live lazy ,
although
 they are convenient for them and less
time consuming
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.
Lot
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 of studies revealed that most
of
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Indian
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the Indian
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women
women's
womens
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women
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 are more obese in nature,which would give birth to some serious ailments like diabetes and cardiac problems. Another reason is ,due to long working hours ,persuades the
people
 to lesser
excercise
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exercise
.Nowadays ,
people
wants
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 more and more money ,to meet
this
 requirement they start doing extra jobs,in meanwhile they start neglecting their health .
As a result
 ,they would suffer from arthritis and cardiac arrest like diseases. There are some measures,that can individuals implements in their life .
People
 should
inculcates
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 the habit of walking
eveyday
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everyday
 and tries to make it
daily
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a daily
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 routine and
alongwith
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along with
this
,
government
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the government
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 should improve the pavements and construct more parks in city centres .As another measure,
people
 should encourage to stop using
car
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cars
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 unnecessarily and tries to finish easy work by
walk
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walks
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such
 as shopping and kids should
goes
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 school by walk rather than buses and cars. To conclude ,with
an
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 invention of technology ,
people
becomes
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 more lethargic and there are some effective solutions that encourage the person to walk frequently.
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