Some people believe that parents should teach children how to be good members of society others however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People
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greatly
whether good manners should be taught to
children
by
parents
or educational institutes.
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formal and disciplined way. On one hand,
people
who advocate that
parents
role
is more vital in developing
children
social behaviour may argue on the basis that
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consider
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parents
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model
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. As young
people
imitate their guardians and
thus
learn from them how to react in various social situations.
For instance
, most of the
children
start their education at the age of three and till
then
the only teacher is their own
parents
who imbibe and
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cultivate
basic manners in them.
Therefore
,
parents
can guide them to become responsible
people
by setting examples in real life
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scenarios
.
On the other hand
, others argue that school can provide a more formal approach to help
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citizen These institutes use more
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and tried methods to guide kids developing their attitude towards other
people
. For
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, they can use daily
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activities
in class
such
as
role
play and effectively direct them
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practical issues. In my opinion,
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school
should
play
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vital
role
in guiding their pupils due to their formal techniques and including
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.
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inability
of
parents
on account of their busy working schedules increases the part of
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department to inculcate good manners in students. To conclude, while
parents
can become
role
model for their young one's it is
school
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who can teach them in more formal approach and help to become gracious
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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