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Some people believe that parents should teach children how to be good members of society others however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People
 differ
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greatly
 whether good manners should be taught to
children
 by
parents
 or educational institutes.
This
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 formal and disciplined way. On one hand,
people
 who advocate that
parents
role
 is more vital in developing
children
 social behaviour may argue on the basis that
children
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consider
 their
parents
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model
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. As young
people
 imitate their guardians and
thus
 learn from them how to react in various social situations.
For instance
, most of the
children
 start their education at the age of three and till
then
 the only teacher is their own
parents
 who imbibe and
culivate
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cultivate
 basic manners in them.
Therefore
,
parents
 can guide them to become responsible
people
 by setting examples in real life
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scenarios
.
On the other hand
, others argue that school can provide a more formal approach to help
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juveniles
juvenile
 in becoming a
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 citizen These institutes use more
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tested
 and tried methods to guide kids developing their attitude towards other
people
. For
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example
, they can use daily
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activities
 in class
such
 as
role
 play and effectively direct them
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 practical issues. In my opinion,
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school
should
 play
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 vital
role
 in guiding their pupils due to their formal techniques and including
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 as a part of
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.
Moreover
,
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inability
 of
parents
 on account of their busy working schedules increases the part of
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 department to inculcate good manners in students. To conclude, while
parents
 can become
role
 model for their young one's it is
school
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a school
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 who can teach them in more formal approach and help to become gracious
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member of
 society
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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