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Write an essay discussing the advantages and disadvantages of children spending too much time on using computer

#children #time #computer
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to apprise you that my company and I were delighted with your arrangement on 26th Jan 2021. As
this
 was one of the most important days for our organization, it went very well because of your arrangements. On the one hand, the party was very well planned and the decorations at the function were gorgeous. I really like the mouth melting cake and the gourmet food over there. Everyone in the function was very impressed by the lighting, especially by the star shape LED. I am overwhelmed by your service because you handled our guests and staff nicely. I vividly remember that you
also
 served us extra meals and handled them on the spot.
Moreover
, every one of us was over the moon from your service.
On the other hand
, you could make some improvements
such
 as a nice welcome drink and valet parking
Submitted by kaushalmaheep on

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