Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security while others believe that they can not always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and given your own opinion.

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satisfaction is of importance whilst

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opponents prefer career security.

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essay will expand both views;

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, from my perspective, I partly agree with the

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sentiment. On the one hand,

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security brings about a fixed income, which will usually stay steady and helps

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get through hard periods of life

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as getting in a poor health condition or buying houses and cars. Without a stable occupation, the risk of being unemployed will significantly increase and following

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are a wide range of difficulties.

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, when the CORONA virus

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broke out in 2019, various people have lost their

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, had neither heart nor home or even committed suicide, which becomes common in Japan at that time.

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, occupations

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are suitable for employees’ talent and liking will obviously create high productivity in work as they have passion and motive.

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, it will be easier to be creative in work when they truly adore what they are doing and it can be denied that working with passion

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brings about high income. Particularly artists, who can only create stunning compositions only when they put their mind into art and obviously, various artworks are expensive and valuable.

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,

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makes people feel fulfilled and brings them endless happiness, which is vital

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of life as the pressure of the economy is always heavy with every individual.

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not only creates a long-term bond between employees and their occupations but

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stabilizes the human resources and management. All things balanced, it is my firm conviction that

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security plays a vital role in people’s lives, passion and likings should

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be considered as one of the important conditions when applying for occupations.