As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it's no longer mere science fiction.

In general, most
people
tend to view things differently about cloning
human
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for acquiring human spare parts. Some
people
believe that it cannot be real because it is illegal and immoral to clone
human
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humans

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. But, I partially agree that the story of cloning could be
a
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true in some underground labs where several doctors are operating with cloning
human
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. For
this
case, I suppose that spare parts from cloning can help
lot
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of
people
to live longer.
First
of all,
the
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spare
organs
are essential for
human
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humans

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nowadays because these can help many
people
to stay longer with their
family
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families

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than
it
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could be.
For instance
,
people
who had an accident would not be able to survive if some vital
organs
like
heart
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and
lung
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lungs

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were damaged.
Therefore
, the implanted
organs
from the labs or hospitals could be utilized and replaced
to
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damaged
organs
.
This
can considerably save a lot of
people
life.
However
, cloning
human
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is still considered by
majority
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the majority
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of
people
to be unethical
ways
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to receive spare
organs
as well. In the cloning experiment, most of
subjects
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that are cloned still have their own life as normal
people
. But, if we want to take their vital
organs
, the subjects will have to be killed
first
.
This
reason can make
people
think that
the
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cloning can be the most horrible story for them. In conclusion, it is hard to make several
people
to
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view things in the same way in
case
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of cloning
human
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humans

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for getting spare
organs
. In my view, I still assert that cloning is the authentic story in some places. I would think that in the future we will have sophisticated technology which can replace cloning.

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