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Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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The belief of
minor
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 to commence academy early can be viewed in different ways, due to believing, norms and values. In recent times the rise in starting
school
 earlier has increased due to
modernized
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 nature of life. From the
view point
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 of starting institute earlier in
children
, it is best because with the recent development in technology in the world most
children
 born in
this
 technology age has more experience in terms of their doings.
Their
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 is much increased developmental mental stability in
children
 who has the opportunity to start
school
 quickly. The learning process is longer than
the
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 olden days. Most schools in
this
 era
has
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 the capacity to stand any
child
's disabilities. It is very clear that a
child
 who begins education very fast has a greater influence
in
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 both the parents and the
children
.
For example
 in a case of a
working class
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 mother that needs to start working back after the maternal leave and
their
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 is no help, most of them
prefers
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 to put the baby in
day care
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,
this
 would save enough stress and
this
 would make the
child
to
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adapt very fast. On the opposite side of
view
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 if
a
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 infant without parents that don't think
on
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about
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 the benefit of starting
school
 early feels it
a
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waste of money doing that, they
prefers
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 the
child
 gets to a standard age before commencing
school
. There is
also
 a
believe
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 that most
children
 how goes to
school
 too early
has
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 no chance of learning anything. In conclusion, the merit of
adolescent
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 stating
school
 early awaits the demerit with better planning and proper understanding of the needs of early educational background.
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