Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

The belief of

minor

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to commence academy early can be viewed in different ways, due to believing, norms and values. In recent times the rise in starting

school

earlier has increased due to

modernized

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nature of life. From the

view point

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of starting institute earlier in

children

, it is best because with the recent development in technology in the world most

children

born in

this

technology age has more experience in terms of their doings.

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is much increased developmental mental stability in

children

who has the opportunity to start

school

quickly. The learning process is longer than

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olden days. Most schools in

this

era

has

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the capacity to stand any

child

's disabilities. It is very clear that a

child

who begins education very fast has a greater influence

in

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both the parents and the

children

.

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in a case of a

working class

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mother that needs to start working back after the maternal leave and

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is no help, most of them

prefers

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to put the baby in

day care

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,

this

would save enough stress and

this

would make the

child

to

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adapt very fast. On the opposite side of

view

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if

a

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infant without parents that don't think

on

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the benefit of starting

school

early feels it

a

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waste of money doing that, they

prefers

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the

child

gets to a standard age before commencing

school

. There is

also

a

believe

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that most

children

how goes to

school

too early

has

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no chance of learning anything. In conclusion, the merit of

adolescent

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stating

school

early awaits the demerit with better planning and proper understanding of the needs of early educational background.