More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In view of the recent development in the pandemic rise, most companies preferred that their workers perform their duties from
home
. Working from
home
has a greater disadvantage to the advantage.
For
example
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,example

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if an
employees
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employee

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works from
home
they have the highest chances of not performing their duties properly because of so
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many

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may
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many

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distractions either from the
nebourhood
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neighbourhood
gaybourhood

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and
other thing
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another thing
other things

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like noise, lack of light
ect
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at

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this
may
cause
a lot by not concentrating fully. In another
view
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,view

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the disadvantage of working
fro
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from

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home
can
cause
lots of job
oppurtnites
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opportunities

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. Materials and tools to
work
with might be scars and could lead to low productivity. Another disadvantage of performing duties at
home
can lead to laziness and increased cost and low income which could
cause
the input and output not to have a stable balance. It is
dismerit
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demerit

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because
their
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there

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won't be a
team
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teamwork

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work
and
cause
reduced productivity in the business. For that of the merit, it gives you more time to attend to personal
work
at
home
and make you
work
at your convince with pressure and supervision. In conclusion, working from
home
has more negative effects than
the
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apply

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positive. Tasks done at the
work place
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workplace

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would .working is essential, but positively with good
team
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teamwork

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work
, materials and manpower it is most important to
work
at the office.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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