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More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#companies #employees #work #home #development
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In view of the recent development in the pandemic rise, most companies preferred that their workers perform their duties from
home
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. Working from
home
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 has a greater disadvantage to the advantage.
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 works from
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 they have the highest chances of not performing their duties properly because of so
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may
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 distractions either from the
nebourhood
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neighbourhood
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 like noise, lack of light
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at
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 a lot by not concentrating fully. In another
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 the disadvantage of working
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home
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 can
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 lots of job
oppurtnites
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opportunities
. Materials and tools to
work
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 with might be scars and could lead to low productivity. Another disadvantage of performing duties at
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 can lead to laziness and increased cost and low income which could
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 the input and output not to have a stable balance. It is
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demerit
 because
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 won't be a
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work
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 and
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 reduced productivity in the business. For that of the merit, it gives you more time to attend to personal
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 at
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 and make you
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 at your convince with pressure and supervision. In conclusion, working from
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 has more negative effects than
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positive. Tasks done at the
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work place
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 would .working is essential, but positively with good
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, materials and manpower it is most important to
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 at the office.
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