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In the modern world, a university education is essential in order to get a rewarding job and earn a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In todays' competitive
world
, higher
education
 has become a must in order to guarantee a prospective higher income and vocational contentment.
Although
 there are some examples against that generalization, I wholeheartedly agree with the importance of university
education
. Analyzing both new information technologies and
globalization
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 of the
world
 will acknowledge the truth of my agreement.
To begin
 with, particularly after
advent
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 of information technologies, it is strenuous to compete in career life for anybody who
are
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 not experienced higher
education
. Being master with the subject of the career is almost impossible if one could not
absorbe
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absorb
 the updated knowledge in the literature or market, and analyze it properly. Even a plumber,
for instance
, should know the newest
science based
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 methods for customer satisfaction. Because an ordinary customer can learn every detail from internet and become displeased with the obsolescent service. From
this
, it becomes quite evident that universities are fundamental for one's prosperity. Another reason behind
necessity
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 of higher
education
 is the globalization of the
world
. In the recent past, we all witnessed
to
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wealthy merchants who had never gone to
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highschool
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high school
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 or university
,
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 and claimed the experience in commercial life raised their
socioeconomical
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socioeconomic
 status.
However
, nowadays everything has changed.
High
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 salary means that one can confidently communicate with counterparts in the
world
 and that could only happen with higher
education
.
For example
, even the small company owners should know what is happening in their sector, and how can they increase their profit. For these reasons, high school
education
 could not be enough to create a mind to struggle with all these parameters. To recapitulate, higher
education
 should be promoted to everyone due to the reason that it became a primary life knowledge in the globalized
world
 in the information era.
Therefore
,
for getting
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the
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more profitable and sophisticated jobs, higher
education
 is a must.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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