In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In
school
and the work
, some people
put in more effort than others. In this
essay, I will discuss the reason
of some people
work
harder than others, and I will give my own opinion. Firstly
, I will give the reason
for people
's hard-working, and secondly
, I will discuss it is good to work
hard or no.
To begin
with, People
are not all born equal. Consequently
, somebody born in a low-income family, and someone born in a rich family. Also
, disadvantaged children have to study much harder than privileged children to earn the same education. For example
, Ivanka Trump was able to study at the Wharton School
of Finance without the usual academic qualifications because her father is rich and famous. However
, if kids from low-income families want to get into that same college, they have to study extremely hard to meet the scholarship standards because there is no way their parents could afford such
an expensive private school
.
On the other hand
, I believe that it is important to give your 100% effort to work
and school
, the reason
is not just for financial gain, but also
to develop your personality and understanding. Furthermore
, in general, people
work
harder not only for themself also
for their loved ones. For example
, if a person works hard on a task, they will have a chance of going new knowledge. Moreover
, if they are hard workers at work
, they can get their kids' good educations and buy bigger houses for their families.
In conclusion, disparities in education and employment are the main reason
why some people
have to work
harder in these two sectors than others. However
, this
is not always a good thing because it can cause regrets later in life.Submitted by mhdshmnsr on
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