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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals
It is irrefutable that in
this
 highly advanced contemporary era, environmental
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problems
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 in lead day-by-day.
However
, some
people
 are of the opinion that
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 of particular species of animals and plants are
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 issue of  present times. While
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 others believe that there are more problems than just extinction. In
this
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 I shall discuss both views and give my opinion. On the one hand, many types of plants and animals are on the verge of
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. Many studies and research have proven that
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 it is one of the leading environmental
problem
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.
For example
,
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the loss
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 of frog species can affect the whole food chain as they are the main source of food for snakes.
Additionally
, as per Albert
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"
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 the bee disappeared off the face of the earth, man would only have four years left to live". By taking all
this
 into consideration,
loss
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 of particular species will have detrimental effects on humans.
On the other hand
,
people
 of today are suffering from pollution,climate change and global warming. When it comes to pollution,
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 of the population has to deal with all kinds of pollution
such
 as air water sound etcetera.
In
addition
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people
 from all parts of the world are struggling with an expected change in climate and increase atmospheric temperature.
For instance
, recently in a city of Canada, over
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people
 have died due to sudden
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wave
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 whereas an unexpected flood in Germany resulted in the death of many.
This
 shows the severity of different environmental problems. In my opinion, both aspects of
this
 issue have equal importance. Because both will have a greater impact on humans. In order to prevent
further
 damage,
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 as a global village
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 to stand together and try to mitigate the problem. To conclude, I reiterate that,all types of environmental changes deserve equal importance.
Moreover
, everyone
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 the same responsibility in ameliorating life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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