Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is causing more good than harm for the home countries?

Due to high employment rates and good living

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in foreign

countries

,many pupils are lured and preferred to move abroad .Some

people

believe

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this

migration

are

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beneficial for their homeland.But I believe that

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this

trend has direct and indirect harmful impacts in

people

's

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of in their own nations.

First

and foremost demerit is ,today ,

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portion of knowledgable students are moving to developed

countries

for sake of job opportunities ,which leads

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negative effects for their own motherland.

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, the

people

of developing

countries

suffer from serious ailments and they don't get proper treatment just because of

paucity

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of medical

staffs

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in government hospitals and resulting in

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fatality rate has been increasing day by day . Another disadvantage behind

of

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trend is

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learners who moved to

another

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countries

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tution

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tuition

fees and other

accomodation

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accommodation

fees in thousand or in lakhs of dollars,which would help to boost the

economy

of that nation.A study revealed in 2019 by

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Canada

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government ,the 67% contribution in their total

economy

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made by international students.

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,most

of

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the

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nations

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relies on student immigration for the

economy

. The main

advantageous

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of studying abroad is ,they can get

chance

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to interact with

people

of different

language

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languages

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and

culture

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,which would enhance their

broaden

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of horizons of knowledge.A study revealed by

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of

windsor

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,scholars becomes multilingual ,when they get in contact with other students. To conclude,it is evident that

this

trend has more demerits than merits,studying abroad cause paucity of

skillful

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person and enhances the

economy

of other nations.