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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is causing more good than harm for the home countries?

#students #move #country #studies #harm #home #countries
Due to high employment rates and good living
standard
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 in foreign
countries
,many pupils are lured and preferred to move abroad .Some
people
 believe
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this
 migration
are
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 beneficial for their homeland.But I believe that
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this
 trend has direct and indirect harmful impacts in
people
's
live
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 of in their own nations.
First
 and foremost demerit is ,today ,
major
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 portion of knowledgable students are moving to developed
countries
 for sake of job opportunities ,which leads
a
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negative effects for their own motherland.
For example
, the
people
 of developing
countries
 suffer from serious ailments and they don't get proper treatment just because of
paucity
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the paucity
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 of medical
staffs
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 in government hospitals and resulting in
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fatality rate has been increasing day by day . Another disadvantage behind
of
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this
 trend is
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learners who moved to
another
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another country
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countries
,paying
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tution
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tuition
 fees and other
accomodation
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accommodation
 fees in thousand or in lakhs of dollars,which would help to boost the
economy
 of that nation.A study revealed in 2019 by
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Canada
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 government ,the 67% contribution in their total
economy
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made by international students.
Therefore
,most
of
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the
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nations
,
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relies on student immigration for the
economy
. The main
advantageous
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 of studying abroad is ,they can get
chance
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 to interact with
people
 of different
language
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languages
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 and
culture
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,which would enhance their
broaden
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 of horizons of knowledge.A study revealed by
university
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 of
windsor
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,scholars becomes multilingual ,when they get in contact with other students. To conclude,it is evident that
this
 trend has more demerits than merits,studying abroad cause paucity of
skillful
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 person and enhances the
economy
 of other nations.
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