International tourism has become more popular in recent decades. However, this can have a considerable impact on the countries which attract large numbers of visitors. What positive and negative effects does tourism have on countries which are popular destinations.

With the
convenience
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transportation has brought to
people
, more and more
people
tend to travel around the world visiting different
countries
.
However
, it might cause a great effect on the visited
countries
since there is a great number of
visitors
. In the essay, I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks in which
tourism
bring to popular
countries
. In terms of positive aspects, there are several advantages
tourism
can bring.
Tourism
can certainly boost the economy. As
tourists
gradually increase,
business
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businesses
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in all different
kind
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kinds
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of fields
such
as accommodation, food or outdoor activities will have more customers comparing with those in the past.
Therefore
, governments may
also
provide more jobs to
people
so as to deal with the increasing amount of
people
visiting
to
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the
country
.
Moreover
,
countries
are given the chance to allow
visitors
to learn more about their local cultures. Knowing more about their culture means that
tourists
are more familiar with the
country
, once
visitors
like their culture or hoping to know more, they are more likely to visit the
country
again.
However
, large numbers of
visitors
may
also
cause negative impacts on the
countries
. Prices
at
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the
country
can become more expensive to the locals. Visited
countries
would want to earn more money from the tourist at no doubt,
therefore
, a place
that is
popular
in
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tourists
, the cost of goods will
sure
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be higher than those that are unpopular.
Furthermore
, historical sites will probably be damaged slightly due to the overcrowded
people
walking around, and there must be some
tourists
that do not obey
to
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the instructions written on the sign.
Hence
, governments have to spend more money on repairing the damaged historical sites than providing a better economy for their
people
. In conclusion, while
tourism
can bring many benefits to
countries
, it
also
has several drawbacks.
Thus
, we should look for methods that could prevent the negative effects in order to make
countries
more suitable for tourist
destination
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.
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