Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and town is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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abound. It is believed b a group of

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that the presence of more plants in open

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is more crucial than domestic

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regard since each of them would have specific positive outcomes for

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. On the one hand,

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would benefit

people

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in various ways.

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, these

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could compensate

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environmental crises which are the consequences of modern lifestyle.

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are capable of purifying air on a daily basis. In doing so, rarely would

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suffer from asthma or climate change since pollution which

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have generated would be dramatically mitigated. So the more

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are planted, the cleaner the air would be.

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,

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would be healthier both physically and mentally if sufficient numbers of

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were planted in open

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. These places would be frequently used by

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for either recreational or leisure activities. Regarding exercise, individuals would be enticed to walk or run there leading to

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weight. As far as mental diseases are concerned, spending time in nature and merely looking at

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would boost confidence and release anxiety.

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, not only would plants alleviate environmental costs, but they would

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lead to

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of

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both physically and mentally. Constructing extra residential

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in open

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,

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, could be

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beneficial for

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.

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, it would prevent

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from travelling long distances.

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usually have preoccupied themselves with either work or study which require their presence in offices or educational institutions. So they should inevitably travel to those venues. The length of their journeys would be dramatically high unless new apartments were built in open

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. Since the majority of their destinations are located in city

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while they vulnerably should accommodate in suburb areas.

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, the price of

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would dramatically increase on the conditions that

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faced the dearth of

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in

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. Since

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would compete for purchasing or renting the ones that are located in

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to avoid moving into suburban apartments. In doing so, the owners of

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increase the costs of their

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.

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could be utterly detrimental to the economy of countries.

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, both individuals and

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would be prone to

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of residential

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unless new ones were constructed in open

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. In conclusion, I partly agree and partly disagree with the notion that planting

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in open

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of

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has priority over constructing domestic

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.

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environmental and health issues would be reduced,

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and

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would encounter some difficulties.