Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Being a parent is a dream of most couples.
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, aborting a
baby
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within the
first
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few months of pregnancy is not uncommon, Some people believe that
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an act should be authorised, as the couple might have other priorities at their early stage of career, while others completely refute the fact. In
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essay, I will discuss both views and provide my opinion. On one hand, Some people think they should be given a chance to focus on the career over nurturing the accidentally conceived
baby
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.
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, poor young couples, might not have enough money to raise and provide appropriate facilities for their
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. so they simply want to focus on their quest to earn money.
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they tend to terminate the pregnancy.
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, many of the masses want to reserve their rights to have a
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or not,
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leading to their full-fledged support for abortion being made legal.
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, it has been commonly observed that infants are given up just for the reason of not wanting a
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girl. In India, it was a common trend in the late '90s to abort the female gene in the mother's womb, as a common dogma of a girl being a financial burden on her parents, and she would leave them after marriage eventually.
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caused a bulk abortion of
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girls in the century, and lead to a skewed sex ratio.
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, most of the patriots think that the identification of the
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's gender and termination of the infants should be curbed. To conclude, having a
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or not is totally one's choice, it is
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a right as a human. But, having an abortion just in favour of a specific gender is completely unacceptable. Strict laws could be imposed to disallow the sex detection of the embryo followed by a termination of pregnancy, with that said, it could be permitted in the
first
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few months since at
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an early stage the gender determination is not possible.
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